Civil Dispute Resolution
Section 1 (49% FAIL): Discuss the issues facing a disadvantaged group in the UK. Outline the impact these issues have on health and wellbeing.
Describe any barriers to care and how these may be overcome You have discussed the issues facing a disadvantaged group in the UK and started to consider the impact on health and wellbeing.
However, there is only superficial description of the barriers to care and little suggestions as to how these barriers can be addressed.
The section on ESA is mostly reproduced from the gov.uk ESA website.
You need to consider how barriers can be overcome, rather than just reproducing information on the welfare system. Section 2 (49%, FAIL):
Define the role of the third sector in the UK in relation to health and wellbeing.
Using examples evaluate the role of the third sector in the UK in relation to the group identified in section 1
You have defined the role of the third sector and there is some consideration of the link between the third sector and the NHS/social care services.
However, the rest of this section is mostly descriptive regarding two third sector organisations.
There is little evaluation of the third sector and no links to the literature here.
Remember, in order to evaluate, you need to do more than just describe the achievements of an organisation. Section 3 (49%, FAIL):
Describe the role of your placement organisation in promotion of mental and physical wellbeing for the group identified in section 1 and reflect on your learning and placement experience.
You have described the role of your placement organisation in the promotion of health and wellbeing.
However, the personal reflection in this section is lacking.
You’ve said the experience was “life changing” but it is not clear how.
There are little considerations of implications for future practice.
You need to analyse your reflections and consider the learning from this placement.
You may find using a reflective framework such as Rolfe helpful here.
Section 4: General (49% FAIL): Spelling, grammar and referencing; adherence to word count.
Multiple typographical errors. Inconsistent use of capitalisation. Poor standard of referencing.
In one case, there is a directly copied sentence from an online source with no quotation marks or citation given. Errors in reference list formatting, especially with regards to authors of references
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