“beautiful oops” 3 page memoir

mla format, header saying “professor jackson” and “english comp 1”

a memoir about a “misadventure” describe how you thought the experience would be. describe how it actually was. identify what you could have done differently to insure a better outcome.

strong thesis statement (well developed)
3 body paragraphs (include both examples and ideas that renforce or illustrate the thesis)
conclusion (reword/restate thesis)

fill in background details who, what, when, where, why, and how and use show details not tell. dont be repetitve. use strong verbs. use “i” statements not you